A thank—you note

2015-10-21 19:37余熙
第二课堂(课外活动版) 2015年5期
关键词:老師灵活运用连词

余熙

Thanks for your invitation. Id love to, but I cant. Because my parents is on business, wont next month until come back. My grandma is ill in bed, need people look after. and English exam is coming. I must study for the exam. So I dont have to come to your party.

文甜老師点评:这是八年级上册Unit 9“如何礼貌拒绝他人邀请”的写作话题。该同学基本写出了主要的内容,但是对于固定的短语、句型不能灵活运用,没有注意主谓一致,连词、关系副词使用不准确,内容不够完整。

范文:

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your invitation. Id love to, but I cant go. My parents are on business. They wont come back until next month. And I have to look after my grandmother because she is ill in bed. Besides, an English test is coming, so I have to get ready for it. Im sorry but I cant go to your party. I hope you have a good time.

Yours,

Li Ping

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