放飞梦想

2016-04-17 00:43
疯狂英语·初中天地 2016年10期
关键词:誓师大会行文流畅中考

放飞梦想

中考百日誓师大会,一个鼓舞人心的日子,一个让回忆不断涌入的日子。百日后,他们将结束这场备考马拉松;百日后,他们会踏入自己的理想高中,一步一步实现自己的梦想……在放飞气球的那一刹,他们也正放飞着自己的梦。在本期“学生风采展示板”,广州市育才实验学校的初三学生们道出了自己在百日誓师时的感受。我们要相信,努力会有回报,而那三年间美好的一点一滴也会永存于每个人的心中。

100-Day Countdown

It goes without saying that the last 100 days is precious to us. We have already studied in our junior high school for nearly 3 years. Something happened to us, which told us to cherish all we have and study hard for the future. It is called 100-Day Countdown.

On March 5th, we held a ceremony. We let our balloons fy to the distant sky, just like our dreams which will come true in the future. Some students wrote down their favorite senior high school, while others encouraged each other. Everyone has his dream.

Maybe my eforts will also take a vivid form some day. The pains after the long-distance race and the tears I fow will be paid. Some people told me that something called fate can't be changed,but I think eforts can change everything.

I believe the sufferings are temporary and the value of them is permanent. I will try my best and make myself regretless.

初三(2)班 石慧熙

朱枫老师点评:本文行文流畅,简洁清晰地讲述了小作者在初三百日誓师活动当天的所见所感,表达了其为中考目标全力以赴的决心。文章中词汇和句子的表达集中体现了小作者的语言功底,如“It goes without saying that...”“while”“precious”和“sufferings”等表达。另外,定语从句及宾语从句的灵活运用也给这篇文章加分不少。

An Unforgettable Experience

I am musing through memories, wondering how time few so fast. It seems that we haven't been in school for too long, but actually there are only one hundred days left for us to study here. After another one hundred days, we will take the senior high school entrance examination.

Last Tuesday was an unforgettable experience for all of us. Our school launched an activity to inspire the students' spirit and give encouragement to both teachers and students. We were all in high spirits. We yelled the vow out loud. We walked across the playground confidently with big smiles on our faces. We set the balloons free and watched them fying away, hoping our dreams will be achieved. The school was full of enthusiasm and determination.

My thought flew to the very day three years ago. We said goodbye to our primary schools and stepped into Yucai Experimental School, starting to meet new friends, face new environment and deal with diferent problems. Time fies, we really have to bid farewell three months later. However, I'm so thankful for my luck to meet all of you and spend the memorable years with you. Maybe in this September, I won't see your faces and hear your laughter, but I will hold all the memories deep in my mind.

Although one hundred days count down,it is enough for us to get ready for the examination as long as we cherish every minute. In this period, we may feel like giving up, but just think of the efort we have made. These three years is like a marathon. Now we're in the most crucial part of this longdistance race, therefore, all we have to do is to carry on with courage.

Though it is hard, I believe we can work together to make it through. Just remember to cherish the last one hundred days we stay together, and keep fighting for our dreams. Dreams are never far away, the key is whether you have the courage to pursue it.

初三(2)班 刘可昕

朱枫老师点评:文章以第一人称的角度讲述了百日倒计时当天小作者参加活动的感受,字里行间无不流露着小作者对学校的热爱,以及师生间的不舍之情。文章中间由“My thought flew to the very day three years ago.”让读者的思绪和小作者一起回到三年前刚进入初中校门时的情景,不禁让人感慨时光飞逝,须得好好珍惜最后美好的初中时光。

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