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安徽省合肥市第四十六中南校区八年级（3）班 傅星宇

傅星宇，来自安徽省合肥市第四十六中南校区八年级（3）班，是校级“学习标兵”、“三好学生”。他性格开朗，爱好广泛，喜欢阅读、诗词和音乐。在各类大型英语考试中，他曾多次获得满分。

Last summer holiday,I went to Beijing and Zhangbei Grassland with my classmates.We went there by train.We left Hefei in the night and got to Beijing the next morning.

On the first day,we went to Tian’anmen Square in the morning and in the afternoon we visited the Palace Museum.There were many different exhibits from the ancient times.We were excited because we had never seen them before.After that we also visited the Summer Palace and saw the Kunming Lake.How big and beautiful they are!

On the last day in Beijing,on the Great Wall we m et several groups of tourists from different countries.We were so lucky because we wanted to try our English all the time,so some of my classmates began to talk with them.The Russian student tourists could speak a little Chinese,like “xiexie”and “zaijian”.So we were happy to take a group photos with them.

After we finished our trip in Beijing,we took the coach to Zhangbei Grassland.It was cooler there and its air was fresher than that of Beijing.During the trip in Zhangbei Grassland,we ate some delicious roast mutton and took part in some wonderful activities,such as watching fireworks and watching some traditional performances about Tie Muzheng.

The tour was interesting.On our way home,we still talked about the tour.It will be remembered by us forever.

教师点评：

这是一篇游记。全文按照旅游的时间和地点顺序展开，脉络清楚，结构严谨，语言准确，过渡自然。

如果小作者能在文章的最后小结一下旅游所带来的知识增长、眼界开阔、身心放松等益处，文章就更完美。