My Friends(徐和辰)

徐和辰

I have two friends.

One is John and the other is Cherry.

John is a boy.

He is six years old.

He has a cute round face.

I often play games with him.

Cherry has yellow hair and sparkling eyes.

Cherry likes eating bones.

Can you guess what Cherry is？

She is my lovely pet dog.

I have great fun with John and Cherry.

指导老师 潘展蓉：

孩子们能抓住所寫人物或事物的特点，并将自己与家人或朋友的故事写出来，字里行间中充溢着一份对家人、朋友的喜爱之情。行文流畅，语言生动，富有童趣。